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To be a wise man, consideration can help us. As we all know, most of people like to make a immediatly conclusion after he seeing or hearing the things. They always ignore that lots of things may have another reasons. Recently, I have watched a TV Programes, names WHERE FATHER WILL GOING. A boy has hearted another boy to cry, so the boy's father began to accuse the little boy with a serious tone, and it made that boy begin to cry too, the little boy doesn't admit his mistake. And then, the father smile to that boy, tell him what he should to do and what he shouldn't to do. After the father change his tone, the boy told his father he just want to help the little boy because the air in that environment is not fresh.What's more, the boy appologize to that little boy. The story tell us that we should considrate the reason but not make a immediatly conclusion after we seeing or hearing only
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