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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40868
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
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作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;缺少组织,上下文衔接欠流畅;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。

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To be a wise man, consideration can help us. As we all know, most of people like to make a immediatly conclusion after he seeing or hearing the things. They always ignore that lots of things may have another reasons. Recently, I have watched a TV Programes, names WHERE FATHER WILL GOING. A boy has hearted another boy to cry, so the boy's father began to accuse the little boy with a serious tone, and it made that boy begin to cry too, the little boy doesn't admit his mistake. And then, the father smile to that boy, tell him what he should to do and what he shouldn't to do. After the father change his tone, the boy told his father he just want to help the little boy because the air in that environment is not fresh.What's more, the boy appologize to that little boy. The story tell us that we should considrate the reason but not make a immediatly conclusion after we seeing or hearing only

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