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文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；文中从句的数量太少；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。
Form: LiMing To: Mary chen It's time for you to notice the staff to celebrate the New years .I will come to BeiJing for a week. So, you should hold a party with other guys, I hope the party beautiful, fantasy,and different form before. What's more, you'd better discuss the party time, place and the before prepare with the guys. And that decide on the time and place. I believe that you can do it!
