2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays we can find that there are kinds of packaging for products.And more people perfect to spend much money on packaging.Because they think it's very nice to give their friend a good impression. The reasion for this phenomner is that custumers's ideas are not good.First, they want to cheer their frends up .They look for some ways to atrcitive their attention.Then,many people don't find anther way to let their friends happy. In my opinion,this way isn't good.we should have a good idea to this case.