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文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中能使用多样的词汇表达，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用。
As we all know, it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. why? There are three reasons. Firstly, eggs can be breaked up easily. if we put all eggs in one basket, the eggs at the bottom may be crumbed. what's more, an crumbed egg can leading other good eggs to go bad easily. Secondly, put all eggs in one basket is dangerours. Like the war, if we let all the soldiers seep in one are, the enemy can defeat us easily.But if we let our soldiers in different areas, the enemy doesn't know the main soldiers in which area, so they doesn't know how to defeat us.By this way, we can protect the eggs. The last but not the least, we may doesn't want to eat it if we put all in one basket beacuse the things will be treated as a pleasure only when it is very less.
