题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中衔接词丰富;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;请注意分段。
It is universally acknowledged that trust is essential of public interaction.Without trust,there is nothing should be leave behind in our interpersonal relationships.On the contrary,for the individual,we are able to build up a more intimate friendship with others as absolute trust we have.However,it easily destroy your trust more than you build up,therefore, you should treasure it.