2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

with the technology developing, computer have step into our life.we learn knowledge by computer ,work by computer and communicate with our friends also by computer.all in all,the computer bring convenient to us . but , in my opinion,everything have two sides. so we should control our behavies in computer. one the hand,computer have make us feels the world smaller and smaller ;one the other hand , computer have take side-things to us.for example,it has bring out crime, damage our health,inflouent our study's way . as the fact ,we should let the computer serve for us ,not be controled by it.