作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者使用词汇表达不够灵活,需要多使用一些高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
It is obvious that knowledge is the treasure for human, but without practice, knowledge is meaningless for us, because practice is the key to it. Firstly, when we study, we need to do some practice to increase our understanding to it. Without practice, we will forget what we have learnt fast. It means that we have leant nothing. Secondly, practice can help us find out some new views. If we learnd something and do some practice, we will find out some new views of it. Only in this way, we can master the knowledge well. In a word, practice is important for everyone. If we want to be knowlegable, we should study as many as possible. The most important thing is we should do practice to testify what we have learnt.
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