2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例。

This is my hometown where you will see.I'm grow up in there.Now,I want to tell you the most interesting place.The place is beauty and fresh that often play with friends.Why the place is so interesting?The first it's have all kind of people who bring to fun game,such as computer game.The second is you can plant of you flower when a long time you came back will see that is grow up.The third is eat all sort of foods which you visited people.So,do you ready?Let's go.