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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16961
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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If a foreign friend of me wants to buy a book, I will high recommend Twilight to him. Stephanie who wrote the book after become a housewife. Twilight tells a love story between a common girl called Bella and a vampire named Edward. Despite Bella knew what he is, she is still uncontrollably in love with him. I have two major reasons for the recommendation. On the one hand, what really made me move is that Edward and his family fighting with the vampires in order to protect Bella. On the other hand, no matter what kind of troubles they meet, they always together. It brings me different comprehension about love. Their lover like the sunshine, floating down to the city of Twilight. In short, this book will provide you with a deep insight into the love.

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