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If a foreign friend of me wants to buy a book, I will high recommend Twilight to him. Stephanie who wrote the book after become a housewife. Twilight tells a love story between a common girl called Bella and a vampire named Edward. Despite Bella knew what he is, she is still uncontrollably in love with him. I have two major reasons for the recommendation. On the one hand, what really made me move is that Edward and his family fighting with the vampires in order to protect Bella. On the other hand, no matter what kind of troubles they meet, they always together. It brings me different comprehension about love. Their lover like the sunshine, floating down to the city of Twilight. In short, this book will provide you with a deep insight into the love.