作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中衔接词丰富。
If I were asked about my favorite place, WuHe would definitely come to my mind first. Because WuHe is my hometown. It stands be side a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. Located in south China,WuHe enjoys a rather enjoyable environment and climate. The climate here is very warm which is very suitable for people to do some outdoors activities. My hometown is very beautiful and lovely too. Everywhere you can see the flowers, glass and trees. What 's more, in this city,i have lived for 18 years with my parents, my friends who have supported me. It has almost all my memories. WuHe is not only the city where I was born, but also the only place I have never been able to leave. I love my hometown. In a word, my love won't be changed, because it is my hometown.