2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In china ,there are many famous landmark buildings in there thay have a long history.As one of the most countries with an ancient civilization and full of ancient customs.Let me introduce them for you . The Great Wall,as a landmark building,it located beijing and it build in order to defensed enemies when ming dynasty.it's very famous and long,there are mang people come here climb it .there is old saying :one who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero. The Forbidden City ,alought it is almost 600 years old,it is still very beautiful.In ancient time,this place offer to emperor.the room is very gorgeous and grand.during holiday,many vistiors come here just want to pay a visit here.such as west lake,huangshan mountain,a lot of beautiful sight spots.If you come here,i think you must like them.I hope you can come here nearly future.