2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China ,there are many famous landmark buildings in there thay has a long history.As one of the most countries of an ancient civilization and full of ancient customs.Let me introduce them for you. The Great Wall,as a landmark buildingwhere located beijing rim and it builded in order to defensed enemies when ming dynasty. It's very famous and long,there are mang people come here to climb it . There is old saying :one who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero. The Forbidden City ,alought it is almost 600 years old,it is still very beautiful.In ancient timeS,this place was emperor"s living room .The room is excessily gorgeous and grand.During a holiday,many vistiors come here just want to pay a visit here.such as west lake,huangshan mountain,a lot of beautiful sight spots.If you come here,i think you must like them.I hope you can come here after nearly future.