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托福独立写作模拟题:关于金钱

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:16浏览次数:1365
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.

Question: Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. Give specific reasons for your position.

题目讲解
本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 大量的钱可以使我们过上更舒适的生活。
2、 金钱只是物质交换的工具,满足舒适的生活已经足够。

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Nowadays, with the level of people's life rising, money plays a more and more popular and important part in our society. But because the big differences among the occupations, the differences in people's salary are also noticeable. Then a part of people think making large amounts of money is the most important thing in life, but others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. We can't remark which is much better or more advanced than the other ,because each one is just a personal altitude to life. In today , having large amounts of money is truly means we can have more options and experiences in our life. As for me, if I have large money, I would go around the world and experience the thing that I have never experienced. This is the main reason that sting me to make efforts to earn money. Because I believe that money is the base which can support me to see more and walk longer. Maybe someone thought money is just something that support daily life, and the meaning of life is far more money. My mother told me:" Happiness is just what you want to have ,and then you have." I am sure I can understand this because I have saw many people who lived in an old town and didn't have a high salary, but their lives went very peaceful and happy. Each opinion is right, but I prefer the first one. After all, I am young, I still have dreams and ambitions. I need a lot of money to support my steps. But I won't regard money as the most important thing in my life ,it is only the tool I'd like to use. But many other things, like love, moved, glory are the real I want to pursuit.

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