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作者词汇基本功不错，建议今后多用学术词汇；全文结构较为严谨；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
There is no question that human being is a part of nature, so we need to find a way to keep balance between our activities and nature. If we cannot feasible measures to rein in chemical pollutions, green house gases emission and any other negative changes to the environment, it will be ourselves turned out to be the biggest victim of environment degradation. Not only will we lose our health and happiness, but also the future generations will suffer from our behaviors. Some people believe there is still time and space for us to deal with the situation step by step, but the truth is, this planet’s plants and species are disappearing at the record high rate in the past decades. So, we need to take iron fist measures. Fist of all, the government should forbid any pollutants from factories. Industrious waste is the main culprit of pollution, and the factories who dissembled them into ecosystem barely pay the price. Many countries develop economy at the cost of citizen’s living safety. Second, cultivate the ethos of austerity. The papers, metals and other resources consumed by human being is unimaginable huge every year, and not all of them are necessary. If every one of us can save a piece of paper per day, then we could save numerous trees in the Amazon region, and then in turn protect of home of both human and other lives. Third, extend the use of renewable energy and green technology, such as solar panel, thermal electricity and electric car. Till now, many advanced technologies are still known and used in limited circles. It’s government’s responsibility to subsidize such projects and make them prevalent.
