字数:200满分:100分
作者句法基础较为扎实;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富。
As is shown in the cartoon, in front of a football door stands a goalkeeper, imagining the door is too bigger to keep, while other player is preparing shooting, with a imagination that the goalkeeper is a giant! Straightforward as the drawings is, it mirrors reality and is loaded with profound meanings. The drawing illustrates that how confidence plays a pivotal role in individual success, especially when confronting challenge which is not one shot in a deal. Ask anyone what is truly the vital attribute of top performers,which separate the high achievers from the rest of pack, and the answer is always: have the confidence to make a big breakthrough no matter how hard the situation is. Filled with a variety of examples of this character, the following one may be the most impressive. The great musician Beethoven struggled against his deafness and composed the soul-stirring Fifth Symphony "Destiny", which could be interpreted as a saying that suffering is inevitable, but the courage to fight it renders life worth living. Another case in point is Sun Yang, a legend in world swimming field. Facing a false accusation by Horton of being a "drug cheat” and suffering from the overwhelming stresses and strains, nonetheless, his perseverance, strong will and confidence enable him to become the first swimmer in history to win Olympic gold medals in the 200, 400, and 1500-meter freestyle events, winning respects from all over the world. In a word, believing for yourself is the pyramidal cornerstone for success. Without the endeavor to be a better man, any favorable results are probably short-lived ones. Therefore, we should realize its value and strive to pursue it.