2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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In recent years,most of people more and more notice the education pays.Why?In moden soceity,the country need some telengy people.If you have a hign degree,you would got a good job! Now,in 2011,employees are some higher degree's people like higher than Bachelor's degree.Unemployees are some college,hign school's no degrees people.And less than hign school diploma's people were most no job. So,think this,i think education is very important !study is useful for everyone.I hope a lot of people can studyed in school.If do this,we can made ourselfs become more knoeledge and country will become strong!