用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
My dear friend, thanks for hospitality when I had a travel in you hometown. Now you come to my hometown. I will take you to Chaoshan where has all kinds of delicious foods. It's mainly consists of Chaozhou, Shantou and Jieyan. The most representative food are beef ball, steamed vermicelli roll, fa gao and so on. The native people have a custom that drinking Gongfu tea. Not only foods in there, but has long history, especially Chaozhou, there has many historical sites. Hanyu, A well-known poet, was a officer in there. So I deem you will yearn for Chaoshan.