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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71617
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

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My dear friend, thanks for your hospitality when I had traveled in you hometown. Now you come to my hometown. I will take you to Chaoshan where has all kinds of delicious foods. It mainly consists of Chaozhou, Shantou and Jieyan. The most representative food are beef ball, steamed vermicelli roll, fa gao and so on. The native people have a custom that drinking Gongfu tea. Not only foods in there, but has long history, especially Chaozhou, there has many historical sites. Hanyu, a well-known poet, was a officer in there. So I deem you will yearn for Chaoshan.

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