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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3100
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
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1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
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作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文中衔接词丰富;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇表达比较恰当,避免拼写错误。

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Currently, growing individuals prefer to join in the exam of certification which they figures out the various certification is more useful than having class steadily. Thus,it is raising a phonmenon of certificate craze in the era of the development of social economy. The sections of people who join in the qualification exams are diverse. Some of them participate in the exam is for getting more experience about the exam which cultivate their mental changes and improve their abilities of study. What's more, the other people think about that gaining the professional qualification is more useful for their life when they are working in the society. Last but not least, little of the persons just want to earn more money for themselves. As for me, it is useful for us to join in the exam of qualification positicely. The certification is a provement which it can prove our ability about the certificate area. So it is good and fantadtic to participate in the qualified exams. To summarize, we should assert this thing is dialectical and figure it rationally. Paying attention to joining the exam of certification is good for us on some extent.

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