增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强高级词汇的使用;语言不流畅。
From: Wang Haiyang E-mail: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com To: Mr.Johnson E-mail: sales-department@hotmail.com Date: dec.23rd, 2008 Dear Johnson, We haved received 3000 pieces products of your company.But according to our sigining of the No.35 order, quantity of product shall 3500 pieces,The other 500 pieces have not been received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking foeward to your early reply.