增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;词汇表达较灵活准确,高级词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;语言不流畅。
From: Wang Haiyang E-mail: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com To: Mr.Johnson E-mail: sales-department@hotmail.com Date: dec.23rd, 2008 Dear Johnson, We haved received 3000 pieces products of your company.But according to our sigining of the No.35 order, quantity of product shall 3500 pieces,The other 500 pieces have not been received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply.