正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达较为丰富,但高级词汇比较少,单词拼写要也加强;语言不流畅。
From: Wang Haiyang E-mail: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com To: Mr.Johnson E-mail: sales-department@hotmail.com Date: dec.23rd, 2008 Dear Johnson, We haved received 3000 pieces products of your company.But according to our signing of the No.35 order, quantity of product shall 3500 pieces,The other 500 pieces have not been received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply.