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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词。
From: Wang Haiyang E-mail: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com To: Mr. Johnson E-mail: sales-department@hotmail.com Date: dec.23rd, 2008 Dear Johnson, We haved received 3000 pieces products of your company.But according to our sigining of order of No.35, quantity of product should be 3500 pieces,the other 500 pieces have not been received so far. Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply.
