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Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell about it. At first, I must have a good sleep, beacause Senior high school entrance examination is very tird. second, I will plan travel round world. I will go to Korea, Japan,Australia and Thailand. I will visit you in America at the last stop. Third,I will pack my bags to go to high school. Yours, David
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