2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Dear Fred, I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell about it. At first, I must have a good sleep, because Senior high school entrance examination is very tired. second, I will plan travel round world. I will go to Korea, Japan,Australia and Thailand. I will visit you in America at the last stop. Third,I will pack my bags to go to high school. Yours, David