小学二年级英语作文:Our house

文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；文中从句的使用的有点少了；文中拼写错误比较多，用词也稍显贫乏。

our house is a big and the nice of looking,we have a tv, bedroom,kitchen and so on.Yeah ,my house is in the hubei of chain,there have many mountaines and water.It is a beautiful city.Then our house have three bedroomes,one kichen and two liveing roomes. It was butil in 1996 year and my parents always live in there for 20 years.