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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11298
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少。

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With the improvement of technology, mobile phones are more and more generally appeared in our daily life. There is no doubt that mobile phones make it more convenient for us to get in touch with others and also help a lot in amusing us when we are boring. However, we can't ignore the phenomenon of overusing mobile phones. For instance, some people look at their phone when crossing the street, others focus on the phone when they have meals with families and friends and so on. Overusing mobile phones have a number of bad effects:Firstly, it make people become lazy and less positive and then they will lose confidence about themselves to some degree. Secondly, it will make people sleepy and have no passion in the daytime, which will badly affect their work and study efficiency.Thirdly, it will have a bad influence on people's social stability since they have spent less time on talking with others. These are my reasons why we should not overuse mobile phones. What do you think?

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