Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
从句比重偏低,有几处句子错误;文章词汇使用比较恰当,高级词汇积累不足;全文结构较为严谨。
Internet talking is most inteste thing or bad thing. Your can find some news, buy some shift or watch some TV show. But it cause your parents could not talk with you more, that made them crying. I don`t want see they sad, because this is a newly world, we couldn`t because these game or video to leave parent alone.