题目要求:
Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解:
报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段:开头
第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力
第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压
第四段:结尾
句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,全文结构较为严谨。
Nowadays, we live in a big city where the transportation is convenient and the infrastructure is completed. Nevertheless, we are now discontent with our life more and more. Everyday we wake up in the morning and prepare for working and back home lately. It seems that we are trapped in an endless circulation. But there are really some problems that have a great effect on our emotions. We may find that we gradually start to feel tired about everything. Is that true that we are too critical to our life? We keep complaining about the environment pollution, our health problems, the working stress and so on. The quality of our life is decreasing sharply so that we lost all the interests. We can't change the objective environment immediately though, we can change our attitude to life. With the development of the technology, I have no doubt that some pollution problems will be solved in the future. At the same time, everyone should have the consciousness to protect our environment and reduce the pollution. When it comes to our mental problems, we need to find a way to distract our attention. Reading in our spare time is a good way to reduce the working stress. In any case, it's obvious that we should find something we like to help ourselves get relaxed. We should also exercise more and keep fit then we can have the energy to do other things. All in all, it is your own attitude that decides your quality of life.