单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
My friend name is ben. he is not too tall . He likes to play basketball and swimming . He is a kind of man and likes to help with the questions of someone. He is a clever and smart person . He often helps with my homework. We are in the same classroom and see each other every day .