单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
My friend name is Ben. He is not too tall. He likes to play basketball and swimming. He is a kind of man and likes to help with the questions of someone. He is a clever and smart person. He often helps with my homework. We are in the same classroom and see each other every day.