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The Internet has been widely used in every aspect in our society and economy. Many people serf on the Internet to shop products , make friends with different countries via Internet and so on. As far as I am concerned, the education is greatly infected by widely using Internet. Why would I say that? For example,we Chinese people used to learn English by the teachers at school. Nowadays, we can learn English on the Internet, there are many web resources to help us in learning English or other languages. Not only the people in society but also the students at school. The Educational learning webs can help students