文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;语言不流畅。
Dear David, My name is LiHua. I am a middle school student. I live in Shanghai. I like collecting stamps and sports.I am interested in English, and I can sing a lot of English songs. My classmates also want a internet pal. They hope get help in English. I very like England.I will go to England in this holiday.