希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅。
Dear David, My name is LiHua. I am a middle school student. I live in Shanghai. I like collecting stamps and sports.I am interested in English, and I can sing a lot of English songs. My classmates also want an internet pal. They hope to get help in English. I like England very much.I will go to England in this holiday.