2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

My views on Online Shopping Nowaday, Online Shopping has been a kind of fashion. Online Shipping has many advantages, but there are a lot of problems. In my view, Online Shopping is very convenient. Online shopping does not need to go out to buy things, greatly saving our time. In winter, we can’t afford to go out to buy something again.