2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；从句数量偏少；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

My views on Online Shopping Nowadays, online shopping has been a kind of fashion. online shipping has many advantages, but there are a lot of problems. In my view, online shopping is very convenient. Online shopping does not need to go out to buy things, greatly saving our time. In winter, we can’t afford to go out to buy something again.