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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦168:××到此一游

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:10浏览次数:1827
要求:
近期,我国一名中学生随父母旅游时,在埃及一著名景点文物上刻写“××到此一游”,此事经媒体曝光后,在国内引起极大反响。作为一名中学生,你就“如何文明旅游”这一话题,谈谈自己的看法。
提示:
1、旅游中不文明的陋习,如……;
2、文明意识和行为,如……;

3、词数80左右(首句已给出,不计算在总词数之内)。


Nowadays, traveling is becoming a more and more important part of our life._________
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能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。

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People enjoy traveling on national holidays such as May Day and the National Day. It is healthy to go out to breathe fresh air and horrizon people's eyes. However, these days more and more uncivilized behaviour has been exposed in public media. For example, when a middle school student traveled with his parents to Egypt, he just left a mark saying "I have been here" on an Egyptian tourist spot. Teachers taught us to keep civilized and polite in public. As a middle school student,I think our students' civilized awareness should be impoved and behaviour should be regulared to be polite. Wheverever we go traveling, we should maintain clean and civilized.

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