3、词数80左右(首句已给出,不计算在总词数之内)。
能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。
People enjoy traveling on national holidays such as May Day and the National Day. It is healthy to go out to breathe fresh air and horrizon people's eyes. However, these days more and more uncivilized behaviour has been exposed in public media. For example, when a middle school student traveled with his parents to Egypt, he just left a mark saying "I have been here" on an Egyptian tourist spot. Teachers taught us to keep civilized and polite in public. As a middle school student,I think our students' civilized awareness should be impoved and behaviour should be regulared to be polite. Wheverever we go traveling, we should maintain clean and civilized.