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可是当增加高级词汇的使用，文中有拼写错误；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
A Beautiful City in China In china,there are many beautiful city with great mountain and river. Now, I will introduce the place where I born. It is Zhejiang province that give me some deep impression.zhengjiang,with many mystery and insterest,have a large reputation in China.Such as the west lake，it attract many person from all of the world every year due to its beautiful and fame.What is more,there is a staue of luxun in Shaoxing.Do you have hear his story.He is a great person,a brave writter can critical the social and start using flexible word.I appreciate him very much. If you are insterested in my country.You can come and I could guide you around everywhere,perticularly Zengjiang.I would tell their history stories,I think,which must appreal to you.my deal friends,I am waiting for you.
