2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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It is universally acknowledged that trust is essential of public interaction.Without trust,there is nothing should leave behind in our interpersonal relationships.On the contrary,for the individual,we are able to build up a more intimate friendship with others as absolute trust we have.However,it easily destroy your trust more than you build up,therefore, you should treasure it. It is universally acknowledged that trust is essential of public interaction.Without trust,there is nothing should leave behind in our interpersonal relationships.On the contrary,for the individual,we are able to build up a more intimate friendship with others as absolute trust we have.However,it easily destroy your trust more than you build up,therefore, you should treasure it.