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作者词汇量积累不错，高级词汇积累较少；作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
A Beautiful City in China In China, there are many beautiful cities with great mountain and river. Now, I will introduce the place that I born. It is Zhejiang province that gives me some deep impressions. Zhejiang, with many mysteries and interests, has a large reputation in China. Such as the west lake, it attracts many persons from all of the world every year due to it's beautiful and fame. What is more, there is a statue of Luxun in Shaoxing. Do you hear his story. In my mind , he is a great person and a brave writer can critical the social and start using flexible word. I appreciate him very much. If you are interested in my country. You can come and I could guide you around everywhere, particularly Zengjiang. I would tell their stories in history, I think,which must appeal to you. My dear friends,I am waiting for you.
