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文中从句数量过少；作者词汇量积累不错，高级词汇积累较少；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。
A Beautiful City in China In China, there are many beautiful cities with great mountain and river. Now, I will introduce the place that I born. It is Zhejiang province that gives me some deep impressions. Zhejiang, with many mysteries and interests, has a large reputation in China. Such as the west lake, it attracts many persons from all of the world every year due to it's beautiful and fame. What is more, there is a statue of Luxun in Shaoxing. Do you hear his story. In my mind, he is a great person and a brave writer who can critical the social and start using flexible word. I appreciate him very much. If you are interested in my country, you can come and I could guide you around everywhere, particularly Zengjiang. I would tell their stories in history, I think,which must appeal to you. My dear friends,I am waiting for you.
