语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。
We always believe that it's true for what we see or hear,as the saying goes "seeing is believing".Then we maybe draw a series of conclusions.But sometimes it is unwise for that,there are some reasons for it. First of all,many things we see or hear are just their apperance not the truth.So if we conclude hurrily may lead to making mistakes.Besides,every coin has two sides.Everyone has his own opinions on one thing,thus,we should know about clearly and we have the right to judge what we see or hear. To sum up,as fa as i'm concerned,we shouldn't make a concludsion at once on something we see or hear,we also shouldn't blieve others' views without evidence.
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