文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;可适当增加几条从句;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。
It's unwise to make a conclusion when you first see or hear something immediately.First and foremost, with the development of science and technology ,information becomes more fast than before.It requires the ability of recognizing it,if you make a conclusion it's too abitrary.Last but not the least,there were numerous of successful persons who specialized in their mojor and made a big contribution for their country,they spent so much time to collect information and did many experiments that they made a correct conlusion.It took their whole lives.Science and development require not only patience but also accuracy.Admittly,we may try to think and check it before making a conlusion.So the more you learn to think the better progress you will get.
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