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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉，要加强拼写。
As we all know, it's unwise to put all eggs in one basket,but why it's unwise to do it? There are several cases could be cited to support this view. It's known to us that if a person is additted to glamble that he will probably put all of his money and his house and other variable things into the game ,however,,he will lose everything including his wife and his home.Worsely,he will do anything to get money;for example,he will robsomeone of his money and phone,break one's house and get into it,enve sell his vissues;all this he did just to get money!In another case,a boy got a poor score in the term-over exam,avoiding his farther's bad temper he decided to change the score by himself.Unfortunatly,his mother found it and toll his father,so the boy boy get some bruise.In these cases,their behavior like put all aggs in one basket,but the man can find a job and the boy can study harder rather than deceive his parent. First of all,it's unwise toput all aggs in one basket,we should think-twice before we do some important decision.
