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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10391
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,高级词汇的使用还有很大提升空间。

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As we all know, it's unwise to put all eggs in one basket,but why it's unwise to do it? There are several cases could be cited to support this view. It's known to us that if a person is addicted to gamble that he will probably put all of his money and his house into the game ,however,he will lose everything including his wife and his home.Worsely,he will do anything to get money;for example,he will rob someone of his money and phone,break one's house and get into it,evee sell his issues;all this he did just to get money!In another case,a boy got a poor score in the term-over exam,avoiding his farther's bad temper he decided to change the score by himself.Unfortunatly,his mother found it and toll his father,so the boy boy got some bruise.In these cases,their behavior like put all eggs in one basket,but the man can find a job and the boy can study harder rather than deceive his parent. First of all,it's unwise to put all eggs in one basket,we should think-twice before we do some important decisions.

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