小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少。

i have a good friend , he name is Lily , and we recognized each other five years ago , we spend a lot of time together , when I feel alone , she will come with me , when I feel sad ,she will encourage me . we ofter go shopping on the weekend, she like the new clothes , but i like the delicious food . I think we know each other very deeply , we will be always the best friends in the future .