小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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when I grow up, I hope I could provide the best life to my parents and my family , I hope my parents could be healthy , when I gradute from the university , and I will get my salary , then we could buy the parents for them . and also I could be a manager in a big company , contribute my knowledge , grow up with my company . Also I hope I could find my lover and have a lovely baby .