文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇使用比较灵活。
Internet communication There is a picture vividly depcitied that a boy is unwilling to communicated with his parents except online ,even to the extent that his mother just call the boy to have something to eat in computer.Actually,the increasing number of the young man is influenced by internet which will hider the normal communication with others.Though parents shared the concern of the problem,there is always not a good solution for it. Recently,there is a option that "will electronic communication replace face-to-face contact?"on the internet,when I heard about it first time I even thought it is kidding me.What ?replacement ?I think this group of people is carzy,the option is ridiculous cause I hardly think electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact,ok,i confess communication online is convenient and that will breaked the limit of space ,but the original communication is not electronic communication but face-to-face,I believed that people are more willing to faced a alive people than a cold machine,people need emotion but intelligent equipment. We should use internet in the right way and absolutely not let it replace our face-to-to contact that make us more closer,so,please save your time online and spent that with your parents.