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作者在句法层面做的很棒；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者词汇基础不错，高级词汇使用比较灵活。
Internet communication There is a picture vividly depicited that a boy is unwilling to communicate with his parents except in Internet ,even to the extent that his mother just calls the boy to have something eatable in computers. In fact,the increasing number of adolescents is influenced by internet which will hider the normal communication with others.Though parents pay close attention the problem, there is never a good solution for it. Recently,there is an option that "will electronic communication replace face-to-face contact?"On the Internet, when I heard about it first time I even thought it is kidding me.What? Replacement ? I hold the view that this group of people is crazy,the option is ridiculous cause I hardly think electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact,ok,i confess communication online is convenient and that will breaked the limit of space ,but the original communication is not electronic communication but face-to-face,I believed that people are more willing to faced an alive people than a cold machine,people need emotion but intelligent equipment. We should use an internetion in the right way and absolutely not let it replace our face-to-to contact that makes us more close,therefore,please save your time online and spent that with your parents.
