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作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
Internet communication There is a picture vividly depicted that a boy is unwilling to communicate with his parents except in Internet ,even to the extent that his mother just calls the boy to have something eatable in computers. In fact,the increasing number of adolescents is influenced by internet which will hider the normal communication with others.Though parents pay close attention the issue, there is never a good solution for it. Recently,there is a point of view that "will electronic communication replace face-to-face contact?"On the Internet, when I heard about it first time I even thought it is kidding me.What? Replacement? I hold the view that this group of people is crazy,the option is ridiculous cause I hardly think electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact,ok,i confess that communication online is convenient and that will break the limit of space ,but the original communication is not electronic communication but face-to-face,I believed that people are more willing to faced an alive people than a cold machine,people need emotion but intelligent equipment. We should use an internet in the right way and absolutely not let it replace our face-to-to contact that makes us more close,therefore,please set aside your time online and spent that with your parents.
